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We have changed the colour correction on a lot of the shots, made the sequence walking down the stairs shorter. We have tried to add more shot variety in the false scare but aren't sure if this works. We also re-filmed the whole first sequence up until the couple see Santa on the t.v as we thought this needed a lot of work.
Feedback
We got a lot of feedback on this cut both verbally and writen.
Some verbal feedback we got was from a male within the target audience say that the texting scene ruined the continuity and killed the effect of tension, he also said that the killing scene was quite gory and that he would have faster paced editing to "hit the sweat spot".
Some written feedback we got from a previous rough cut from a female who is in the age range 15-24 which we took into account for this one.
To sum it up:
- Need to imply sex in a better way
- Facial expressions and feeling aren't very scarred
- Narrative quite unclear in garage scene
- Santa on TV footage was good
- She noted some of the good shots
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