This is a playlist with all our rough cuts and sample scenes so they are easy to find and look through to see the improvemnet from the beginning. We ordered it by date so the latest cuts are on top and the oldest are at the bottom.
Showing posts with label rough cut. Show all posts
Showing posts with label rough cut. Show all posts
Monday, 2 April 2018
ROUGH CUT Playlist
This is a playlist with all our rough cuts and sample scenes so they are easy to find and look through to see the improvemnet from the beginning. We ordered it by date so the latest cuts are on top and the oldest are at the bottom.
Sunday, 1 April 2018
ROUGH CUT 4 (With titles)
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We have changed the colour correction on a lot of the shots, made the sequence walking down the stairs shorter. We have tried to add more shot variety in the false scare but aren't sure if this works. We also re-filmed the whole first sequence up until the couple see Santa on the t.v as we thought this needed a lot of work.
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We have changed the colour correction on a lot of the shots, made the sequence walking down the stairs shorter. We have tried to add more shot variety in the false scare but aren't sure if this works. We also re-filmed the whole first sequence up until the couple see Santa on the t.v as we thought this needed a lot of work.
Feedback
We got a lot of feedback on this cut both verbally and writen.
Some verbal feedback we got was from a male within the target audience say that the texting scene ruined the continuity and killed the effect of tension, he also said that the killing scene was quite gory and that he would have faster paced editing to "hit the sweat spot".
Some written feedback we got from a previous rough cut from a female who is in the age range 15-24 which we took into account for this one.
To sum it up:
- Need to imply sex in a better way
- Facial expressions and feeling aren't very scarred
- Narrative quite unclear in garage scene
- Santa on TV footage was good
- She noted some of the good shots
Saturday, 3 March 2018
Saturday, 24 February 2018
ROUGH CUT 3
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Our newest rough cut where we have 90% of all the clips included. We have identified the clips we need to add and will have a new rough cut produced very soon after. We have to include our own made sound effects but these will mostly outline the final product.
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Our newest rough cut where we have 90% of all the clips included. We have identified the clips we need to add and will have a new rough cut produced very soon after. We have to include our own made sound effects but these will mostly outline the final product.
Tuesday, 20 February 2018
SAMPLE SCENE Killing scene (SOUND EDITING NOT DONE)
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Here is a rough-cut without sound effects of how the killing scene is going to play out. It is a base design and needs improvement. This needs to be refined and added to the newest rough cut which will be uploaded soon.
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Here is a rough-cut without sound effects of how the killing scene is going to play out. It is a base design and needs improvement. This needs to be refined and added to the newest rough cut which will be uploaded soon.
Tuesday, 9 January 2018
ROUGH CUT 1
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Our second, completely reshooted cut of our final idea which we will hopefull be progressing on in the following weeks.
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Our second, completely reshooted cut of our final idea which we will hopefull be progressing on in the following weeks.
Wednesday, 20 December 2017
ROUCH CUT 1
Our first look into the final idea we will have. All the characters are present and the rough outline has been done further. We realise we need to work a lot on costume, mise-en-scene and shot variety.
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SAMPLE SCENE 1
A sample scene we have put together and will reflect on in class. We only had the resources to use one character, hence it will just be a rough outline of the idea. Not our final idea.
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